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Naga Paradise (Chapter 1)

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NARRATOR: There once was a land known far and wide as "The Naga Paradise". This was a land where Nagas could live in peace and avoid capture and torture administered by humans with hate for them. There were many kings scattered across the entirety of the divided land that all had but one common goal. To eradicate the so called "Naga threat" that lurked throughout their lands.  It was here from this corrupt land that some humans left and ventured to seek solace amongst the Nagas in their private land. This is the story of one such pilgrimage of a particular twenty year old male human named Enzo to this exotic land.

I could only imagine the wonders of what was soon to come when I entered the Naga Paradise lands. I was told from a young age that this place was wicked and cursed but I begged to differ. It was for this that I always received nothing but neglect and shame. I was constantly shamed upon by all of the people in my village but no more. Soon I will prove to everyone and to myself that this land isn't wicked or cursed. I will prove my parents and the rest of the village wrong. I will find peace where I'm going. Of that I am sure. I was to arrive at the land of Nagas by taking a long road. I heard that certain Nagas would brave through the Naga hunter infested lands to help guide traveling humans to safety. The long path I was taking was through a large forest that was virtually uninhabited and was only labeled as a territory by the nearest king. I always liked to take in the features of the land with its sprawling tree population, it's beautiful wildlife, and it's calming breezes. These elements of the forest always made me feel at one with myself, although I still slightly doubt myself being able to make it to the paradise lands. I also feel as though I can since I've made it this far. According to my map that I was given, I'm about a quarter of the way there. Wait. I hear a noise. Some rustling in the bushes. What might it be? As I went to check on the noise a sword sprung from the bush. I assumed the men that came out from behind the bush were some Naga hunters. I was taken aback that they'd even be near the path let alone on it waiting for a passerby. They began the common tactic of intimidation. I couldn't say I wasn't convinced of their toughness. "Well well. I see we've got a little Naga lover here don't we boys?" His henchmen were just as eager as he was to persecute someone like me. I tried to convince them to do the opposite. Let me go. "Please. I don't mean any harm just please don't hurt me!" I yelled. "No no no. We aren't going to hurt you. We're going to decimate you." As they got closer and closer I felt as though my journey was over. This is it. I'm dead. They're gonna gut me and leave my body for the vultures. I won't ever get to see the paradise lands. Hell, I won't even get to see a Naga in the flesh. How could it be that I of all people am doomed to such am a fate?! Just as I was about to start bracing for the worst I heard more rustling from the forest. "Oh great! As if being in my current situation wasn't bad enough! Now I have more bandits trying to kill me! But I was wrong, and oh was I wrong. I saw one of the men to my left scream as his legs were being wrapped by a strange looking...tail. It's a green tail. It can't be what I think it is. Before he could react the tail's grip on his legs quickly tightened and he was pulled away at an astonishing speed. The other two tried to run but one of them was wrapped around the waist as he tried to run. He flailed his arms as he hopelessly tried to yell for help. He was pulled into the bushes. The wringleader was still standing there in amazement. He hadn't dare moved. Then I saw her. She rose out from the bushes as if she was never there at all. She's a Naga. And a very gorgeous one at that. She light brown hair, bright green viper eyes, and the lower half of a snake with the upper half of a woman. Her scales were green and shined in the light. She truly Is a sight to see. We both gazed into eachother's eyes for a moment before she quickly shot her tail at the wringleader of the bandits and wrapped him up around the waist. She lifted her tail and slowly brought him to her face.


She gave him a penetrating death stare and promptly threw him onto the ground. She then proceeded to bite each of the captured bandits. They went limp in just a few seconds with nothing but their eyes darting from side to side."Y-you're a Naga a-aren't you?" I asked shakily. "Yes. I am. Did they hurt you at all?" "No, I'm fine. Why did you bother to save me?" "You are a traveler seeking to get to the Naga Paradise right? I figured you needed some assistance." "Well, thank you. I thought I was a goner there. I was worried I was going to die." "Well it seems you're alive now so you've nothing to worry about anymore." She replied. "I'm Bella. What's your name?" "Oh. I'm Enzo." "Well nice to meet you Enzo. I'm hoping that I can accompany you to the paradise lands. I'm trying to return from a little stroll I was taking in the woods." "Little? We're only a quarter of the way to getting there." "I didn't know I was out that far. Well, I guess that explains these cretins." She gestured towards the bandits lying on the ground. "These guys are probably Naga hunters, but today the hunters were the hunted." I looked at them as they lay there not moving. "Did you poison them?" "No. I just paralyzed them so they can't get away. We're gonna take them with us so that they can pay for their attempted crimes against an innocent like you. Though I may have a change of plan in a few moments. Let's stay here for the night. We'll start heading out tomorrow morning, but first I just need to take care of these offenders." "What do you have in mind?" I asked curiously. "Weeeell...I was thinking that since I haven't had anything to eat in a while and since I'm starved, I'll just have these offenders for dinner." "That's a little harsh don't you think?" "So them trying to kill you isn't harsh?" she replied. "Well...I guess you make a good point but do you have to eat them. I thought Nagas were more gentle." "Oh believe me. We can be, but not when we're dealing justice to those who need to be punished." "You don't have to watch me eat you know, but if you want to see how justice is served, then by all means, watch."  Bella picked up the wringleader of the Naga hunters with her tail and began wrapping him with her tail. She then began leaning in with her head and opened her mouth wide by unhinging her jaw. Even though the hunter was paralyzed you could see the look of fear in his eyes as he was brought closer to Bella's mouth. His limp body could do nothing as he was being eaten. Bella stretched her mouth over his head and started pushing him in with her arms. After about a minute and a half she had him half way down her throat with his legs dangling outside of her mouth. She was clearly In a different state of mind when she ate. It looked like she was a cook savoring her best dish. The only difference was that this dish was served fresh and alive. With a final gulp Bella had the hunter in her human stomach. She then began pushing him into her snake stomach. She forced him into the separate stomach and I watched as his form could be seen inside her snake body as a human shaped bump. When she was done she re-hinged her jaw and turned to me. *BUUUURP* She let out a loud burp. She blushed. "Excuse me." "You looked like you enjoyed that." "I did. I hadn't eaten in four days afterall. I was starving. He was the perfect meal, but I'm not done yet. One down, two more to go." She said as she licked her lips while staring at the remaining hunters. I let my curious side get the best of me. "Wait a minute. How do you...digest people?" She blushed at the question. "That's a bit strange to ask but I guess I could oblige you with an answer. I have very strong stomach acids that will break them down and then I have a long stretch of inards to finish the job. Then it's out the other end with them." "How do you know when you've hit your limit?" "When I start accumulating more fat on my body. Then I stop eating for a while. Right now my body could use some fat. When my body is more curvy, squishy and soft then I'll take a break." "Interesting. Well I'm not gonna keep the rest of your dinner waiting."


She licked her lips at the remaining two hunters. "Where were we?" *BUUURP* When she finished off the other two hunters her snake half was bloated with the three hunters. I could hear the sounds of Bella's stomach acids working on them. *GURGLE* *GLORP* *CHURN* Bella looked over towards me. "I'm sorry if my stomach keeps you up at night. Naga digestion is some noisy business." *YAWN* "I'm going to try and get some sleep." At that Bella leaned her upper body on her snake body as it digested the hunters. "Goodnight Enzo." "Goodnight Bella." I replied. As we lay in the forest by the nearby path we drifted off to sleep in the cool evening air. The next morning I awoke to the feeling of tight coils around me. Bella had wrapped her coils around me in the middle of the night. "This is a little awkward." I thought. I felt her begin to wake up as she stirred. "Mnnn...Enzo. Good morning." she said tiredly. I tried to break free from her grip. "I'm afraid I can't let you go Enzo." "Why is that?" "I'm still have to warm up. I'm not warm blooded like you. I need some time to heat up. That's why I wrapped myself around you." She tightened her grip on me a little more as she spoke. I was feeling constricted with significantly less air than before. "You're kind of...crushing...me..." She ignored me as she continued to tighten her grip on me. My face was slowly being pushed closer to Bella's breasts. I didn't notice how big they were until now. Now the situation was really awkward. "Um. Bella. Your..." "Shhh. Hush now. Don't move or make a sound. This moment is perfect. She loosened her grip as quickly as she had tightened it. She lined her upper body up with mine and wrapped her arms around me. "What are you doing Bella?" I asked nervously. She didn't respond. She put her face in front of mine and gazed Intently into my eyes. She had the look of a lustfull woman. I could tell that things weren't going to get any less awkward in the near future. "Bella I-" Before I could finish my sentence Bella kissed me passionately all of a sudden. I couldn't resist due to the charm of a Naga. How could anyone resist such a beautiful creature? I kissed back hard and with a passion I never knew I had. She once again tightened her grip on me, but this time she used the tip of her tail to   unbutton my pants. She slowly slipped the tip of her tail into my trousers. Before she could do anymore I quickly grabbed the tip of her tail. She Instantly loosened her grip and let out a loud noise. It sounded like she enjoyed whatever I did. She was surprised. "How do you know about my sensitive spot?" "I never knew that you had one on the tip of your tail." She gave me a seductive stare. "Shall we continue?" "No no. This is all too much and too fast." "But don't you love me Enzo?" "We only just met yesterday!" I replied. "I knew when I looked into your eyes earlier yesterday that we were meant for one another. I just know it." "I don't know about that. This is all so much." "I'm sorry if I came at you a little fast. I'll try to be more cautious about it in the future." "What do you mean by in the future?!" "Well, we can still love one another can't we?" "Look Bella. I don't know how this would work out. Let's change the topic. How about some food?" "I could go for something but I had a lot yesterday and I'm too tired to hunt for nonhuman food anyway." I got up and started off towards the trail to get a head start on walking but before I could even make it five steps away Bella's tail instantly wrapped around my neck and pulled me back towards her. "I know you don't want to have sex with me but could you at least let me cuddle with you?" "It's not like I don't want to have sex it's just..." "Ah hah! So you do want to mate with me! I knew it!" "No! It's much to early to be doing that. We have a long trip ahead of us so let's just get going ok?" "You're no fun Enzo, you know that?" She got up off of the ground and started slithering towards the path. "You coming Enzo?" "Yes. Let's go to where home truly is. In Naga Paradise."   
I figured I'd try my hand at writing snake girl stories. Tell me what you think. It's my first attempt. 
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